Meh.
The style is ugly. So Ugly its permanently stuck in my mind as what not to do. You've captured the essence of a Cliche Western, and by god I wouldn't mind never seeing this again.
I gave this a four because of story value alone. I've seen this before, a ghost out for vengeance, but the twist at the end came to no suprise whatsoever. The way you incorporated the music from some of my favorite westerns worked.
The only improvement is everything, and with practice, and someone that has some kind of inclination for storytelling or at least knows what not to do, thats only an inevitability. Keep trying.